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Post by Chesbro on Jan 21, 2010 2:09:06 GMT -5
Aside from the fact that they didn't all get posted for this show on time.. give me some honest feedback.
Yay or nay on how I'm writing them. (Circle one)
Any suggestions on how to better write them on the show?
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Justin York
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Post by Justin York on Jan 21, 2010 2:29:36 GMT -5
I'm gunna go with the Yay!
lol i think short and summarized matches are better then having them long and dragged out anyway.
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Now give me my raise lol!
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Rastafari
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Post by Rastafari on Jan 21, 2010 4:15:53 GMT -5
YAY.
I think you should at least write a small 4 or 5 line paragraph to end each match just to make it more interesting. I kind of go "ehhh" when the match ends like "And Jamie Krenshaw put him in the down under deathlock" I wanna know if he dominated or if his opponent put up a fight near the end, that type of thing.
Also I think if there is a run in, then maybe a small paragraph before the run in would be fitting. You don't have to go all out on the Showdown matches but when it comes to endings and run ins a little more action before would be nice.
Its your fed, write em the way you want, just my opinion
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Post by Rastafari on Jan 21, 2010 4:16:26 GMT -5
Now give me my raise lol! Not til I get my Enforcer title BITCH |
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Post by Assassin on Jan 28, 2010 17:17:45 GMT -5
I think it's working out well enough. You're keeping the summaries pretty descriptive which is critical in my opinion. The work so far has my nod of approval.
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Post by Chesbro on Jan 28, 2010 20:05:37 GMT -5
Thank ya sir (s).
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Post by Drake Jaxin on Jan 28, 2010 22:05:45 GMT -5
Yep, I've enjoyed the past couple. Keep it up Chestnuts.
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